Golden Eyes
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Last published Fri, Oct 23, 2015
In the new world, when people turn 17, they have to go to a special academy located throughout the world to learn what different powers there were and how to use them. Their powers only show themselves at around the age of 18. When this happens, people's eyes change colour to show how powerful they are. Their eyes turn blue if they control water, green for earth, red for fire and light-steely grey for those who have control over air. Their eyes always keep a thin ring around the outside however to show what their previous eye colour was. There are a few special cases where they come into their powers early but there have never been any people who's powers have shown themselves late.
Until me.
My name is Zamora and not only did my powers come late but when they came, my eyes turned entirely gold except for my pupils. Weird, yes. I don't even want them. Because of this i have been labelled the "freak" of the school. My previous so called friends, left me, ignored me and neither of those, taunted me, made fun of me, bullied me. This happened for a half a year before the school's registered badass came to my rescue and helped me. This is my story and no one can do anything to me now.
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