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The Drawback
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Ongoing, First published Oct 17, 2015
5 kids, and one chance to live. What these kids don't know, is that they have volunteered for their deaths, not the family holiday they were expecting.
 5 children the ages of 12 were given a chance to have a 4-day boat holiday in their dream resort, for free. Only they would have to compete in the 'lost land' as told to be easy and fun. However what happens is totally unexpected and torturous. This 'lost land' was owned by a terrible man who has done horrific things. When they will enter, they must complete challenges and mysteries to finish, otherwise they will be killed. These innocent school children must fight for their survival, unprepared for the challenge. But their ambition and determination might just be enough to keep each other alive. Or will it?
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