Blurry

Blurry

keerat_the_great

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Complete Mon, Apr 22, 2013<5 mins

This is a poem explaining how it feels when you don't know what to do and your stuck trying to find a solution. Then all of a sudden you know what to do and the skies cleared up, with the answer shining with the bright sun.

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