Shades of Sunset...

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Parts 3
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Reads 234
Votes 17
Parts 3
Time 15m

I walked on and on...with the water of the sea touching my feet walking slowly in the direction of the setting sun with tears on my cheeks and salty water in my mouth! I wish I could just run away from all of this!My life is so miserable!God i am coming to you..The water was almost till my neck now.. In next few minutes before I knew I was drowning!The salty water went in my mouth!Oh my gosh! I did not even know how to swim!I closed my eyes thinking of dying peacefully.That was when I felt a tug and a hand on my waist pulling me upwards...That was the hand of my savior!I never knew you that you would come in my life in such an unexpected way and my life would change...Blake why did you pull me up?To get a new life ?If so then why now this?What happened now?Please please!    Hey guys this is just the prologue tell me if it sounds good and exciting...:)I'm a new writer so please help me with your comments.........PLEASE!All Rights Reserved

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