Looks (Looks #1) {unedited}
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  • Reads 9,785
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  • Parts 30
  • Time 4h 12m
Ongoing, First published Oct 20, 2015
Mature
I met him in creative writing class. The first thing I noticed were his eyes. They were sea blue and beautiful. His name was nearly as beautiful as his eyes. Trystan Devlin. Trystan Devlin. Trystan Devlin. But his personality was probably the ugliest part about him.

What's worse is that when I got put into a group with him to create a story of their own, I discovered how much of a jerk he really is. 

But then I realised as I got to know him, I realised maybe he wasn't as bad as he seemed. He was different, broken. I realised that maybe he's more than beautiful on the outside, maybe he's beautiful on the inside too.

Then came the day I realised I was in love with him, that was the day everything changed, it was also the day things started tumbling downhill. I realised that with one another we are no longer broken, but fixed. I realised that we fit together like two pieces of a broken heart.
 
This is a classic broken boy meeting broken girl story.

Find out what happens in Looks.

Rated Mature for Language and only briefly in the future content you should not read if you are under 17.

17+ book just to make it clear.

Unedited for now will completely edit once I finish it and there will be a sequel to it too! It's going to be called chances

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