A Pit Of Poison
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This poem is deep stuff for a person like me who have to deal with The harsh reality of life at such a young age. I advise you not to judge only because you might Hurt the feelings of someone who has been in a position of depression or anxiety. So please if you do decide to leave a comment please make it a positive one because this poem is only about expression, not judgment ;)
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