Cell 51
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Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Fri, Nov 20, 2015
All I can hear is my blood rushing in my ears. Everything is pitch black, but I can still see the door. All I have to do is to get out of this hell.
I can't remember how long I have been in this cell. Really I can't remember anything since Icame here.
Let me explain, my name is Veronica Rosenberg, and I'm the most wanted criminal in the world.I'm a "criminal" because I rebelled against The Orders rules and started the rebellion.
I am only fifteen, but I have committed more crimes in my lifetime than you ever will.
I'm writing this as a memory of this hell. But hopefully I will soon be out, as they have stopped looking for me.
I'm currently in a safe cell fifty one feet below ground. They put me in here do I could live, but I feel as though I am already dead.
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