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People gather around a murder crime scene as I look over the crowd of people. Searching the crowd I find her, my next victim.
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This is my father's story. He wrote it when he was a freshmen. It's also his first story he has ever done. He wants to know what other people think of it. It is a short story. So please comment and vote!
He has other stories and poems that might get posted later.
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