Noticed
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This is my first book, so please don't hate.
"it was all oblivion to me.. they never noticed me, neither did he."
"I could hear people in my head, but it was just myself, thinking and thinking. I couldn't stop, what would happen if this all changed, would i be liked? Would he notice me??"
"He pushed my shoulder, and my books flew.. He looked in my eyes and he smiled.. did he finally see me?, have i really been noticed by him?"
"this unconsiousness and this isolated feeling in my brain has gone.., the voices are gone."
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