Something I must say, is that this is a work that will probably never amount to anything. It will just be something I create myself, that I work on for practice. What I will say is that any phrasing that sounds weird, or any problems with the writing like run on sentences, are traits of the character. Terra does run on sentences and is blunt with the intro. and future characters will be telling the story with their own errors and mistakes with the writing.
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