The 4 murals
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Última publicación vie, oct 23, 2015
Hey guys!!! this is my first story. i wrote this for a school assighnment, so i have thesaurused the shit out of some of these words! i am only year 8 (8th grade) so i would like to hear some positive feedback, but also if you have any emprovements too feel free to comment (i love ma haters!!!)
its quite scary (as scary as i could make it)(not that scary) but i think i did quite well for a first try. PLEASE READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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