Teen Detective
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I hear police sirens go off, ambulance and fire truck coming around the corner. Out of all the days today's the day the elevators weren't working. My sister (Jasmine) and I go rushing down the stairs. When we get to the lobby this girl was dead just lying down on the floor. As soon as I saw the body I recognized who that was. Everything from that point forward seemed very blurry. I don't remember things clearly. All I remember is seeing my friend get rapped up in a bag and placed on a gurney. There was a sharp pain in my chest, I couldn't stand to see my friend dead. I was wondering who did this to her, and I was going to find out because I'm a Teenage Detective.
Will the teenage Detective find out who killed this poor girl?
Will more people get killed?
Will we find out why the killer killed that girl?
If you want to find out all of these questions than keep on reading.
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