Breaking Command
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Last published Tue, Jul 10, 2012
Alexianne or better known as Alex, is one of the only girls on her brother's paintballing team. Even though she's a talented paintballer, her brother Ben and her boyfriend Dominick keep giving her a hard time for not being tough enough despite her best abilities. Then, when a sudden ambush between three paintballing team's break-out, Alex is forced to fend for herself, with the help of her partner Brooke. But when the two girl's get separated in the largest field they've ever played on, Alex becomes the easiest target to shoot.
When the Red Team's captain Brandon, retires his rank for college, his little brother, Jason, fills in his shoes. When Alex get's caught between two rival teams without the backup of her team, Jason has no choice but to save Alex. When the two meet again, sparks fly and there's an instant connection. But with a powerful brother, a dominant boyfriend and a lovesick best friend, Alex is on her own when it comes to love.
Can Alex betray her own team by being involved with Jason? Can she break her sensitive boyfriend's heart? She's going to need all the help she can get, and with her best friend being madly in love with her brother, there's not much help involved. Alex is a strong, funny and extremely competitive girl, but when it comes to family and friends, can she really follow her heart and break all the commands that come her way?
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