The Broken Girl and Mr. Not-so Perfect
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Last published Tue, Nov 10, 2015
Hey guys!! So this story is going to be kind of sad. I'm sorry if there are some grammer mistakes, please politely point them out and I will change it. Also please be nice, hateful comments are just rude and I don't want to see them. I will gladly accept constructive critsism though. Hope you enjoy! Also all of this is from my imaginenation any relation to another book is by accident
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Broken, sad, lonely. Those were 3 words to describe Lily. Growing up was hard and school was even harder. Through the pain Lily always had a smile on that no one saw past. What happens when one event with the school's Mr. Perfect, Dylan Ryder? Does he see the hurt? Is Dylan really Mr. Perfect?
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