The forbidden

The forbidden

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Humanity was divided into ranks. They are judged according to their rank at the age of 16, They would go before the "council" to show their capabilities and abilities. They would get ranked in thei true blood. They are four ranks namely: Bellus Castus- These are the saints of the land. They are seen as the purest and most honest of them all. They are the leaders of the land, only the royal, though the peasants are also highly respected. They believe everyone should live according to the Fate's law. They set high expectations and they believe everyone should follow suit. The Valens- These are the protectors of the land. They follow the law of Zeus, which is the one which everyone on the land abides and respects. It is used to punish and discipline the people. They do not look eye to eye with Castus at times but they do tolerate each other. The Phila Eros- The affectionate, loving and vocalists in the land describes these people.The majority of the population consists of homosexuals (hoots). They believe in giving equal rights to everyone, though the fates would not allow such to happen. The "council" however are the ones who make the decision. The last but certainly not least is the Ferus- They are the the baddest of them all. THe peasants are known as the" Angels of Death", they can bring intolerable and dreadful suffering to the other ranks if they dare cross paths with them but they are barriers which were created by the "council" so they do not abuse this power since they are the FERUS= Sinners. The royal however are identified with the mark of Alvah on the side of their neck. This is two black and red dots tattooed beside each other but with a small space in between which has a staff, this staff has two serpents that have coiled each other and the two heads are at the top with its sharp fangs exposed. The council- This is a society of members from each rank of thr royal family. This was instilled by the fates to try and maintain peace amongst the districts.
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"You sure you want to be a magician?" ask an old woman to a boy. "yes Granny Ren. I will be the greatest magician of all Melloyern." He said enthusiastically as the Granny softly caress his small and smooth hand. The boy then ran to his friends as one of them calling him to play football. The Granny look at the boy silently with a solemn smile. Her eye narrow in a soft and gentle gaze she give to the kids that was playing at her yard. "He will be." she said before stand and walk to a well. The boy were born as a normal human. There is no easy way for him to be a magician. he has no mana in him. Or that's what everyone expect from him. Writer: "Hey, that's enough reminiscing about your past. it's the story description section. Not the story yet!" Nakajima: "Fine. I will start with the description." Writer: " good. get back to work." 13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing, as the name suggest, It was about a holy crystal that blessed a land. like a mainland or somesort. So... Writer: "is that really the right way to make a description?" Nakajima: *sigh* There is a mainland with 13 state under a flag named Melloyern. These all 13 state have it's very own holy crystal that bless the state individually. But, the crystal contains powerful amount of mana that makes every single person in Melloyern going for it. A group of magician called Denials were up to collect all of the crystal to keep them safe from wrong hands. There is a lot of hindrance in their path such as the Kingdom of Melloyern itself is turning against these guys. Still there are more. Can they survive? it's up to them to decide. Can they achieve what they aim for? It's always up to them to decide their own future. Nakajima: "Satisfied?" Writer: *Claps his hands many time* "Very much." Nakajima: " Can I keep daydreaming?" Writer: " what did you say? You also in the story so... get in there!" Nakajima: *sigh and step into the story*

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