The Six Swans Rewrite

Under her stepmother's thumb, Princess Amelie feels the burden of her many faults: her lack of self-discipline, her naivete and wimpiness brought on by 15 years of a sheltered life, her wanting looks and plump body that dictate her unlikely to make a good marriage and doom any chance of her having a successful future without one. Many times, she turns to her brothers, who are her best friends and only comfort.
Then one day everything changes: her brothers are in trouble and she is the only one who can save them. She embarks on a seemingly impossible task, accompanied by a clever-tongued thief, a resourceful maid, and an unexpectedly talented drunkard; but although her friends can provide help and support, it is up to Amie to save her family and her kingdom before it is too late.

Based on the fairy tale "The Six Swans." Following the same basic plotline as my first draft, but with changes in character development and plot details and a slight change in style.