Fourteen
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Last published Sat, Oct 31, 2015
I wrote this for my creative writing class and would love some honest feedback on it. My screenplay is about a women named Jennifer who has been taken captive in an abandoned insane asylum. She has escaped but is re-captured. When she is being dragged back to the asylum by a shadowy figure she is knocked out and has flashbacks of the time before she was captured. Hope you enjoy! Please vote and leave constrictive criticism. :)
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