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I wrote this for my creative writing class and would love some honest feedback on it. My screenplay is about a women named Jennifer who has been taken captive in an abandoned insane asylum. She has escaped but is re-captured. When she is being dragged back to the asylum by a shadowy figure she is knocked out and has flashbacks of the time before she was captured. Hope you enjoy! Please vote and leave constrictive criticism. :)
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This is my first published original work. Danielle experiences her worst nightmare while babysitting. Making her confront her past. This contains a graphic rape scene, hence the Mature rating. If anyone wants me to post an edited version, let me know.

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