... Stops Making Sense
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Last published Sat, Oct 31, 2015
"... Stops Making Sense" is a series of poetic, absurd and surrealist allegories. Each vignette is a puzzle piece which must be solved, or resolved, by Michael Valentine - a battered and worn young nobody, who has become unstuck in time, and who has fallen between the cracks of society. With a storm threatening to destroy Manhattan, it is up to this shambleton to save the sinking ship. Before that, though, he must deal with the insignificant matter of discovering the meaning of life.
An eclectic and bizarre read, "...Stops Making Sense", is obscure, frustratingly convoluted and magically, acid dripped in meta musings of a character who may or may not be what he seems.
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