The Party
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Last published Sun, Nov 1, 2015
Hi, this is the first chapter of a short story I recently put onto Amazon Kindle. You will only get to see the first chapter but if you're interested it would make me so happy if you could go and buy it since I really need the money. It's £1.99 in the UK but I don't know about in other countries, but you can buy it anywhere. You can buy it if you have a kindle device or if you have the free kindle reading app, which you can download. Here is the description of the story from Amazon: Grace thought she'd have a good night, going to her best friend's party. She thought She'd have fun, with her friends and classmates from College. But things don't always work out well.
When something horrible happens to her Grace is left to face the consequences with only her family and best friend to support her. Will she be okay? What are the consequences? What happened? Will she be able to live through the fear? Will she be able to face the consequences given all that has happened? Will the party continue being the worst party ever? Will she be able to move on?
Read to find out.
This is a short story since I'm new to Kindle and want to test out the waters. But I'm planning on adding more, longer stories in the future.
BEWARE: This story does contain mentions of sexual abuse, but it doesn't directly say the words.
And the story is called 'The Party', just go on Amazon and type that in along with Paige Makepeace, which is my name, and it should come up. You do have to be 16 or older to buy it though since there are mentions of sexual abuse.
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