Publicly Posted Drafts

As the name suggests, this is not one story, but many - these are the publicly posted drafts for feedback and opinion. This is how I will communicate with you and know what you people want.
The basic purpose of this is to receive feedback on what projects out of my many ideas should I pursue first. To put it humourously, I do not want ten-twenty comments per day that the so-called "chapters" have no continuity, or something. Each single draft will be based on a single idea/planned project, and will include all the chapters of that project that we want to post publicly.
A sample "chapter" (though that's not the perfect term) has been posted for a Halo 4 unofficial novelization.