Just One Mistake...
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Last published Sat, Jun 29, 2013
It was just one of those normal days for me now. Waking up early, checking on Becca, waiting for the baby sitter to come then going to work trying my best to avoid the boy with the big blue eyes I fell in love with 5 years ago. The feathery brown hair, his blue eyes that pull you towards them and captivates you. His perfectly imperfect smile and just about every thing about him makes you ant to stare for a life time. His name; Louis William Tomlinson My name is Breeana Louise Allis, mother of Becca Jay Tomlinson. Yes Tomlinson. You see before louis ever auditioned for xFactor me and him were the best of friends, inseparable. As a celebration for him making it through xFactor we went out, got drunk and did so many things that should never had happen but it did and now I have a daughter. Louis doesn't know about her and frankly I don't think he should. He ran away ever Since i told him and we have never spoken since. But all this is about to change with one decision I made. ---------------------------- This is my first fanfic. Sorry if it sucks but yeah. Should I continue? Megz-
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