In a Perfect World

This first part I wrote here is actually the potential intro to a novel I've been mulling over in my head for a while. It's only 300 and something words, so give it a read. Tell me what you think.

I might continue it on here, and/or add other random things that pour out of me.

I rated it Mature for moremature, intense themes that could possibly be presented later, just to be safe and keep it open. I don't plan on putting any language or sexual content in this. Thank you.