Thoughts about thoughts

Thoughts about thoughts

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Sitting on the side of the road, before an ever expanding horizon line Before me, appearing as clouds and cars passing by are all the: memories, thoughts, and feelings - that I had believed were me But as I sit and watch, I simply notice them pass and go and everything around me changes and 'I' still remain What is this 'I' that remains? If "I" am that which observes, what is observing the alleged observer...
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-REWRITTEN/EDIT THE ENTIRE STORY ON 7/24/17- Coughing, the smoke swirled in front of me as beams of black and white flashing lights raced across my vision, disappearing as quickly as they had appeared. My lungs ached as they tried to pull in clean oxygen, my eyes straining to see through the grey haze. Once the smoke dissipated some, I could see we had appeared in the middle of a road. It was cracked and full of potholes, the yellow lines coated with dirt and grime from over the years it seemed. Taking a better look around, it looked like a bomb had gone off and I was witnessing the remainders of a city.

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