THE UNTOLD SECRET

THE UNTOLD SECRET

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Rachel and Sarah two twins identical in face but not in behavior have their own problems to solve one twin having decided to leave the world gets ready to take a jump of a cliff and the other worried about what nail polish color to put on for her date . Rachel and Sarah where like bestfriends when they were young but once Sarah got to know the secret her parents knew everything is turned upside down for Rachel . Her parents hate her , her sister .....well she acts like she doesn't even have a sister and talking about friends Rachel didn't even know what was it like too have friends so Rachel finally decides to take a jump of a cliff leaving all her worries ,pain and jealousy behind in this cruel world .so there she was standing at the edge of the cliff ready to take the jump ready to leave all the pain and jealousy behind . She got her feet together took one last breath of the fresh air around her and jumped........
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--Re-written-- When I was 8 we were playing hide and seek in the little park surrounded by bush down the street from my house. It was a large group of us. It was always fun down at the park, since our parents never really came and checked on us. Being twins, Taylor and myself had a bigger amount of freedom then the other kids in our grade, so all the parents trusted at if the Norm Twins were going to be somewhere, their kids would be safe, even though we were young. And that was always true. This particular time at the park we were playing hide and seek. It was one of our favorite games to play. Taylor, Rachel and Connor always had the best hiding spots. I loved counting. The suspense. So I was counting. We counted to 90 so everyone could get the optimal spots in the park. The deal was that we never went too far into the bush. The boulder was our guide. I counted to 90, like normal, and then started looking. There were always specific spots that people hid in, so they were my first points to check. Oddly, no one was in any of them. But to my 8 year old self that made the whole thing better. I started looking hard. But didn't find anyone. I started to call out, starting to get worried. But no one called back. --- Danielle Norm, a musician, dancer, and comitted school student, is just looking to get through school in one piece...

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