Constructive Criticism
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Last published Mon, Apr 29, 2013
"Why do you think you're so good at writing?" Marianna loved writing and reading Greek mythology . When she starts uploading her stories to a website, she finds that it gets hard to take criticism the right way. Will this mystery man help or hurt her writing forever?
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