Grey #VisualRetelling #Grey1 #AU
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  • Reads 89,638
  • Votes 1,677
  • Parts 37
  • Time 11h 26m
Complete, First published Nov 07, 2015
Mature
***FREE FANFIC***@Hg2806 "I loved this start to finish.  It's so different to the original, but kept the key aspects.  A very addictive read."
@FeliciaSpears2 "This is such a great story I love the way you're making it your own."    

***CHRISTIAN GREY ***
 Why do I loathe surprises? I had no control over who my biological parents were or where I spent the first years of my life.  Although removed from my mother's lifeless arms then adopted by perfect all American parents, nightmares of an unpredictable, unstable life with my late mother haunts me.  

I'm a twenty seven year old multi-billionaire who keeps a tight rein of my business and personal life.  I plan every hour of every day until Miss Anastasia Steele stumbles into my life.  

Can Miss Steele look past my success in business, clean, controlled facade and the wounded beast beneath the ten thousand dollar grey suit; or will my alternative lifestyle, complicated relationships and traumatic past overwhelm her? Will she give up on my darkness, like every woman in my life or will she be the only ONE that stays?  

Welcome to my exclusive world, where nothing is black or white, its' Fifty Shades of Grey...

ADULT CONTENT WARNING: TABOO RETELLING|DANGEROUSLY EROTIC | GUILTY PLEASURE | POSSIBLE TRIGGERS | VIOLENCE |MAY OFFEND |YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED|
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Free your dreams by CathyJensen
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Thank you E L James for your wonderful characters. I love using them for my creations. Anastasia Rose Steele has dreams and they have been very wonderful. I was adopted by an Amish family and really don't feel like this is where I belong. I have decided to leave at 18. My parents know this and have tried to talk me out of it and tried to marry me off to many suitors, but I just don't want them. When I leave for Rumspringa I will get my high school diploma and take everything with me. Mom and dad already know I am leaving for good. Charles and Olivia Steele found me on their front porch and adopted me. I am finally 18 and I am leaving early they gave me all my documents so I can survive in the world out there. They give me a thousand dollars and tell me to keep it hidden, but not in my bible. The book they think is my bible isn't. My dad takes me to the bus station in our horse drawn carriage. I hug him for the last time. I touch my cross an he drives off and I buy my ticket. Christian Trevelyan Grey I am in a battle of wits with a man who has none. I am watching as he marks up the contract with changes he wants and he is not getting them. I am in the catbird seat at any meeting I have scheduled. Mom and dad finally gave in and loaned me the money to start of my business as long as I could prove myself in a years time. If not Harvard here I come and a college degree. Carrick Grey is an attorney and Grace Grey is a doctor. Mom stays apprised of the latest gossip, charities and fashions. Elliott my adopted brother is an architect. Mia is studying to be a master chef. All of us are adopted.
It's In The Water by CathyJensen
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Thanks to E L James for your Fifty Shades Of Grey Trilogy and it's characters. In this version I want to have Christian and Anastasia have no family at all. They were brilliant from birth. Foster parents didn't know how to handle kids with genius IQ's so they were constantly being moved around. They became emancipated as soon as they could. They got the high school diplomas early and earned money and saved every dime they could. Christian Grey 21 Anastasia Steele 18 Eamon Kavanagh 45 Enid Kavanagh 45 Ethan Kavanagh 21 Kate Kavanagh 18 Jason Taylor 32 Gail Taylor 28 Sophia Taylor 6 Andrew Taylor 4 Roz Bailey 20 Gwen Bailey 20 Hector Bailey 1 Thomas Sawyer 24 Roger Swan 26 Evan Swan 26 Christmas Swan 18 Dr Shawn Flynn 27 Sandra Flores 21 Flynn's slutty girlfriend Debra Flynn ex wife 25 Conner Flynn 6 David Flynn 4 Cora Flynn 2 Carrick Sullivan 41 Grace Sullivan 40 Elliott Sullivan 23 Mia Sullivan 18 Every time Christian looks around his office pregnant women keep popping up. He thinks the water fountain they gossip around might have something to do with it lol. Roz finally got him to put a day care center in on the first floor. Anastasia is working hard to get her college degree and is close to getting it. One month more. She is working as a chef at a place called the Mile High Club as a chef. We just got news that the place might be sold to some young hotshot billionaire and there will be changes made. Mia is frantic because she needs this job to get into culinary school. So her nerves are getting the better of her. Anastasia tells her to calm down because nothing is set in stone and she has been given job offers all over Washington State. Things don't go smoothly in the transition of the restaurant. Anastasia leads a walk out which leaves a sour taste in the new buyers mouth.
Missing My Heart by CathyJensen
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Thanks to E L James I started writing, her Fifty Shades Trilogy kicked started my writing the good and bad of it. I will use the Characters of the book and some of my own. Carla Adams Steele Morton 40 Anastasia's mother Stephen Morton 50 Pimp Anastasia Lambert 21 Carla's Illegitimate daughter Augustine Lambert 21 Carla's illegitimate Son Paul Adams 19 Daniel Morton 16 Raymond Steele 50 Isabel Steele 40 Rays Wife Olivia Steele 20 Carla and Rays daughter Raymond Steele 16 Ray and Isobel's son Thomas Steele 12 Ray and Isobel's son Grey Steele 6 (named after the guy who saved her mother and her life at an accident scene) Carrick Grey 52 attorney Grace Grey 47 Pediatric Surgeon head of pediatrics Elliott Grey 26 Architect owner of Grey construction and Grey Architectural firm Christian Grey 24 Self made billionaire owner of GEH and Grey International and domestic conglomerate. Mia Grey 21 owner of Shades of Grey Restaurant and Catering Company. Roz Bailey 23 COO GEH Gwen Bailey 22 Roz stay at home wife Oscar Bailey 2 son Sam Bailey 2 son Gail Taylor 26 Christian Grey's head of household Jason Taylor 27 Head of Security for GEH and Grey international and domestic conglomerate Sophie Taylor 8 David Taylor 6 Colleen Kavanagh 42 Co CEO Kavanagh Media Collin Kavanagh 45 Co CEO Kavanagh Media Ethan Kavanagh 23 Psychiatrist Katherine Kavanagh 21 Journalist Kavanagh Media Angela Kavanagh 19 Caterer at Shades Of Grey Jose Rodriquez Sr 55 Consuella Rodriquez 45 Jose Rodriquez Jr 22 Ausuela Rodriquez 20 Ashley Sawyer 46 Teacher Thomas Sawyer 22 Bodyguard freelance Whisper Reynolds 22 Bodyguard /Security GEH Wylie Reynolds 22 Bodyguard /Security GEH Colin Reynolds 22 Bodyguard /Security GEH Debbie Reynolds 20 Bodyguard /Security GEH Austin Miller 18 IT Genius Freelance Miller IT Problems Solved Barney Miller 18 IT Genius Freelance Miller IT Problems solved
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