Grey #VisualRetelling #Grey1 #AU
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  • Reads 89,914
  • Votes 1,677
  • Parts 37
  • Time 11h 26m
Complete, First published Nov 07, 2015
Mature
***FREE FANFIC***@Hg2806 "I loved this start to finish.  It's so different to the original, but kept the key aspects.  A very addictive read."
@FeliciaSpears2 "This is such a great story I love the way you're making it your own."    

***CHRISTIAN GREY ***
 Why do I loathe surprises? I had no control over who my biological parents were or where I spent the first years of my life.  Although removed from my mother's lifeless arms then adopted by perfect all American parents, nightmares of an unpredictable, unstable life with my late mother haunts me.  

I'm a twenty seven year old multi-billionaire who keeps a tight rein of my business and personal life.  I plan every hour of every day until Miss Anastasia Steele stumbles into my life.  

Can Miss Steele look past my success in business, clean, controlled facade and the wounded beast beneath the ten thousand dollar grey suit; or will my alternative lifestyle, complicated relationships and traumatic past overwhelm her? Will she give up on my darkness, like every woman in my life or will she be the only ONE that stays?  

Welcome to my exclusive world, where nothing is black or white, its' Fifty Shades of Grey...

ADULT CONTENT WARNING: TABOO RETELLING|DANGEROUSLY EROTIC | GUILTY PLEASURE | POSSIBLE TRIGGERS | VIOLENCE |MAY OFFEND |YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED|
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Solitude by CathyJensen
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Thank You E L James for Fifty Shades Of Grey Trilogy and the effect it had on my imagination and the characters. It kick started me wanting to create my own versions of your story using your characters and some of my very own. The photo is by Connie Mason Etter she has allowed me use of it. She is a professional photographer in Indiana. Her photos are beautiful. Check Facebook for more them. Anastasia Steele elusive writer who has lost all of her loved ones. She is 18 Carrick Grey attorney Grace Grey doctor/ surgeon Elliott Grey Owner of Grey Architecture, Design and construction 24 Christian Grey Owner of GEH International 22 Mia Grey chefs assistant At the Mile High Club 18 Eamon Kavanagh Co owner and co CEO of Kavanagh Media Enid Kavanagh Co owner and co CEO of Kavanagh Media Ethan Kavanagh psychiatrist 24 Kate Kavanagh College student journalism major 18 Jack Hyde Editor Seattle Independent Publishers Elizabeth Morgan HR Seattle Independent Publishing Heather Daniels Ex Assistant to Jack Hyde at S.I.P. Constance Lewis Ex assistant to Jack Hyde at S.I.P. Allison Ford Ex assistant to Jack Hyde at S.I.P. Audrey Donaldson Ex assistant to Jack Hyde at S.I.P. Jerry Roach owner and CEO of Seattle Independent Publishers Dawn Long, Anne Stewart, and more. Christian Grey Is in process of purchasing Seattle Publishers and this is one of them. Anastasia Steele has best sellers but she will not make appearances or book signings. Publishers have tried to get her in for promotions of her books but she has Attorney Carrick Grey handle everything since he handled her family's last will and testament and stood in for her in the trial of her family's murderers. Raymond Steele father , Carla Steele mother, Shawn Steele bother 18, Alex Steele 22 and Charlotte Steele 24. All were killed in a drive by shooting when they got lost in Michigan in an extremely bad area late at night after their GPS system failed. Anastasia was too sick to go with her family on their trip.
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