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***CHRISTIAN GREY ***
Why do I loathe surprises? I had no control over who my biological parents were or where I spent the first years of my life. Although removed from my mother's lifeless arms then adopted by perfect all American parents, nightmares of an unpredictable, unstable life with my late mother haunts me.
I'm a twenty seven year old multi-billionaire who keeps a tight rein of my business and personal life. I plan every hour of every day until Miss Anastasia Steele stumbles into my life.
Can Miss Steele look past my success in business, clean, controlled facade and the wounded beast beneath the ten thousand dollar grey suit; or will my alternative lifestyle, complicated relationships and traumatic past overwhelm her? Will she give up on my darkness, like every woman in my life or will she be the only ONE that stays?
Welcome to my exclusive world, where nothing is black or white, its' Fifty Shades of Grey...
ADULT CONTENT WARNING: TABOO RETELLING|DANGEROUSLY EROTIC | GUILTY PLEASURE | POSSIBLE TRIGGERS | VIOLENCE |MAY OFFEND |YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED|
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Our faces are just inches away, his breath fanning my face. And after that, he says something, says a simple sentence that makes everything in my insides clench and yet makes me feel safe at the same time. "You are not alone", he says in a firm yet soothing voice. ~*~*~*~ Ana took a self pregnancy test and found out she is pregnant. She, being young & naïve confronts Christian indirectly about it and is heart broken when she finds out he doesn't want kids until a distant future. She runs away, thinking there is no way she can convince him otherwise. But after 6 years, she comes back to Seattle. The question is Why? Why did she come back all of a sudden? What will Christian think when he finds out he has a child? *Gets Better As You Read It* •Top Rank In Fanfiction: #734 on 3rd May, 2018 (based on previous ranking system) In Life: #38 on 11th May 2018. In Fifty Shades Trilogy: #1 on 11th May, 2018 In Fifty Shades Fanfiction: #1 on 11th October, 2019. Start: 13th October, 2017. Finished: 22nd March, 2019.Complete
Lost Souls
Anastasia Rose Steele was never wanted by her mother or father. The day she was born her mother had already signed away her rights to her child. She gave her the name she wanted for her. Not being wanted prevented her from being adopted. Her tiny size scared prospective adoptive parents away. She was born 9/15/1989 an unwanted baby. She became a foster child bouncing around different foster homes. She was born in Seattle Washington at a small hospital. Christian Trevelyan Grey was found in a busy park he was sitting in an expensive car seat, with expensive clothes on him, his everything was very expensive. He was about a week old. The hospital was a very nice one that they took him to. They gave him the birthday of 6/10/1983 he was very healthy. The found a breast pump in the diaper bag and three bottles of milk. Grace Trevalayn Grey 32 was a doctor at Seattle Community Hospital and had decided to adopt due to no be able to have children with her Attorney husband Carrick Grey 34. They had just become foster parents and hadn't had any foster children yet. They asked to foster Christian with adoption in mind. They adopted a Christian year later along with Elliott Trevelyan Grey 8/12/1981. Elliott's only living relative died in a car wreck while he was in his car seat in the back seat. Three years later they adopted a 14 year olds twin identical girls Mia Amelia Trevelyan Grey and Maya Anne Trevelyan Grey born 7/15/1987. The mother signed the papers letting the Greys have her girls. They had their family now. They still were nervous about getting a call about Christian one day.Complete
FIFTY SHADES OF GREY
This is my own twist on one of my favorite book series 'Fifty Shades Of Grey'. There will be three installments. In my version Christian Grey childhood and back ground is mostly the same. I will be giving more detail of it through out the story through his nightmares. His life doesn't really begin to change until he meets Anastasia Steele. Anastasia is an African American college graduating student living with her roommate Kate. She has a loving relationship with the only man she has known as her father Ray Steele. Her and her mom Carla are not as close due to some unresolved issues of Ana feeling discarded when she pick a man over her. Ana and Christian meet the same way as in the official book but what how would the story change if Ana didn't just consider the contract but actually signed it. She puts in her do's and don'ts and follows the rules. How would things change if it was not just Ana catching strong feels but Christian as well. How different would things be if it was him that was breaking all the rules from the start. He still punishes her but it is because he feels she is cheating on him. Will the punishment be to much for her to take? Or will she take it and stay with him in the end? All these questions and so much more will be answered in this book ALL CHARACTERS OF THIS STORY ARE NOT OF MY OWN THEY BELONG TO THE AMAZING WRITER EL JAMES COMPLETED 3/11/2020 JUST WENT THROUGH RE-EDITING AND ADDED A LITTLE MORE TO SOME CHAPTERS THAT I FELT WAS MISSING SOMETHING. 9/11/21Complete
Crossing The Grey
When a woman from their past comes hurtling back into their lives after eight years, Christian Grey and Gideon Cross must navigate their way through a web of secrets and lies which threaten to destroy them. At the same time they must both confront their love of the same woman, and the night that changed all of their lives forever. This is NOT the story you know. Neither is it an extension of Ana and Christian's love story. For context, this story takes place in the same universe as Fifty Shades of Grey, but a few days prior to the events of the first book. ** This story contains very strong language and scenes of a sexual nature and is intended for mature audiences only** The legal bit: I do not own the characters of Christian Grey or Gideon Cross. These are the creations of E.L James and Sylvia Day respectively.Complete
Cassandra Steele 50 Shades of Grey
Cassandra Lily Steele 20 year old Twin sister of Anastasia Steele. Cassandra goes for English Literature. Cassandra hasn't had an easy life, with her and Ana mother leaving them with their step-dad Ray, to her finding out she was a submissive, to having trauma from a scene, Cassandra doesn't try man easily except her father Ray and friend Joes. Christian Grey 23 year old self made billionaire. From the moment Christian was born he didn't have an easy life, with a drug addict for a mother, and a abusive 'care taker' he didn't have it easy. When he was 4 he was adopted into the Grey family, 15 shown by a 'friend' a world he should have never been apart of. What happens when he starts to lose internist in the scene until he meets a light haired beauty What happens when both her sister and best friend get sick when they're supposed to interview Christian Grey and send her in their place. Does she give being a submissive another chance or was the last time too traumatic? Will Christian push her too far? What happens when Cassandra follows the rules while all Christian wants to do is break them? Will the two fight against all odds side-by-side together? Read to find out I only own Cassandra and her story line
Special Delivery
E L James gets credit for the characters names, but the idea is partly due to my weird imagination. Christian Grey is of course a billionaire, single and not looking for a wife. Anastasia Steele has been given no choice but to get married by her very insistent family. Her inheritance is at stake. So she creates a fake name and places and ad on line for a husband. Elliott Grey spots this ad and decides to answer it using a fake name as well. But he describes himself as Christian Grey his brother. He brings in Mia and his new wife in in the setup. He had Barney Christians IT expert trace the ad and find out who the person actually is and finds out the whole story. He decides with his three cohorts this young lady is the right person to get Christian to the alter. Carrick and Grace Grey are worried that Christian will not ever marry. He has had his share of women, but they all want the wedding and he is tiring of all the attention he gets from women who have one goal in mind a ring on his finger showing he is off the market.Complete
Free your dreams
Thank you E L James for your wonderful characters. I love using them for my creations. Anastasia Rose Steele has dreams and they have been very wonderful. I was adopted by an Amish family and really don't feel like this is where I belong. I have decided to leave at 18. My parents know this and have tried to talk me out of it and tried to marry me off to many suitors, but I just don't want them. When I leave for Rumspringa I will get my high school diploma and take everything with me. Mom and dad already know I am leaving for good. Charles and Olivia Steele found me on their front porch and adopted me. I am finally 18 and I am leaving early they gave me all my documents so I can survive in the world out there. They give me a thousand dollars and tell me to keep it hidden, but not in my bible. The book they think is my bible isn't. My dad takes me to the bus station in our horse drawn carriage. I hug him for the last time. I touch my cross an he drives off and I buy my ticket. Christian Trevelyan Grey I am in a battle of wits with a man who has none. I am watching as he marks up the contract with changes he wants and he is not getting them. I am in the catbird seat at any meeting I have scheduled. Mom and dad finally gave in and loaned me the money to start of my business as long as I could prove myself in a years time. If not Harvard here I come and a college degree. Carrick Grey is an attorney and Grace Grey is a doctor. Mom stays apprised of the latest gossip, charities and fashions. Elliott my adopted brother is an architect. Mia is studying to be a master chef. All of us are adopted.Complete
SEVEN DAYS
"What colour of panties are you wearing?" "Excuse me?" She countered "I won't repeat the question again" "Red. They're red" she swallowed "Reach below your gown. Pull it. And hand it over to me" "Why would you want it? It's just a piece of material" she faltered. "They're yours. I want it simply because they're yours. You're aroused. So they're wet. They're going to be soaked with your juices. The very essence of you. I'm going to sniff it, lick it, all the while imagining that it's you, torturing myself until Saturday. The day I fuck you" ~♦||•♦•||♦~ In this erotic romance, Raven Edens is forced to accept an offer, to save her family's life. She's been a good girl her whole life, always took responsibility, always did what was right. Until the day she finds out, her father sold her family to the devil. literally. And she's the one who has to pay. These men were rich, ruthless, and fucking dangerous. If they wanted, they could make her entire family disappear from the face of the Earth. And to pay off her family's debts, she must give herself to the master, for 7 days, for he and the whole bloody organization to do whatever they wanted with her. seemed a small price to pay, for the billions her father owed right? but does she come out of this, the same? 7 days of the utimate sins. carnality was welcomed. Nothing was shunned out. Every fantasy, every desire was fed, explored, and she was the meal. RAVEN EDENS: "7 days of the utmost sins. I'm terrified! I'm surrendering to the unknown. I've never done that before. I exist on control. And to unleash that to someone else, is devastating. I'm afraid my body's going to shatter, or war and say it has needs. I'm afraid I can't keep my body in a tight leash, and under control, after this. One thing's sure though. I'm never going to remain the same again. WARNING: MATURE CONTENT! & EXPLICIT SEX SCENES! (Also, there may be lots of swearing, sexual coercion & public sexual displays!)Complete
A Fish Caught
Thanks E L James for your Fifty Shades books that got my mind on creating stories based on your characters. In this story Anastasia Steele is her own woman and no matter how good looking anyone is she doesn't swoon at their feet. She has been taught looks doesn't mean they are a good person. You have to know who the person really is on the inside as well. Christian Grey has fallen prey to Elena and her BDSM lifestyle and has his own special room in his penthouse and house on the sound. He has a lot of help from Elena to find him submissive females all looking similar to his dead mother. Christian and his siblings have been adopted by the Grey couple.Complete
Her Mr. Perfect (The Fifty Shades Series) COMPLETED
I don't know anything of this world, but there are two things I am very sure of, First, I have always loved him "UNCONDITIONALLY"..... and second that he was, is and will always be my definition of "PERFECT"..... Anastasia Steele, an extraordinary, 28 year old, is soo in love with her Mr. Perfect, Christian Grey that she could not accept that fact he had left him already.... Jack Hyde, a rich hot shot, has fallen for Ana and has decided to make her his at any cost... And then there's José, who's Anastasia's best friend....Does he also want something from Ana. Let's find out how she'll fight through everything to find her definition of Perfect!Complete
Our faces are just inches away, his breath fanning my face. And after that, he says something, says a simple sentence that makes everything in my insides clench and yet makes me feel safe at the same time. "You are not alone", he says in a firm yet soothing voice. ~*~*~*~ Ana took a self pregnancy test and found out she is pregnant. She, being young & naïve confronts Christian indirectly about it and is heart broken when she finds out he doesn't want kids until a distant future. She runs away, thinking there is no way she can convince him otherwise. But after 6 years, she comes back to Seattle. The question is Why? Why did she come back all of a sudden? What will Christian think when he finds out he has a child? *Gets Better As You Read It* •Top Rank In Fanfiction: #734 on 3rd May, 2018 (based on previous ranking system) In Life: #38 on 11th May 2018. In Fifty Shades Trilogy: #1 on 11th May, 2018 In Fifty Shades Fanfiction: #1 on 11th October, 2019. Start: 13th October, 2017. Finished: 22nd March, 2019.
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