They Don't Know About Us {punk n.h}
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  • Parts 31
  • Time 3h 8m
  • Reads 182,512
  • Votes 4,336
  • Parts 31
  • Time 3h 8m
Complete, First published Apr 27, 2013
Mature
Only one look and Niall knew he wanted her, but little did he know that dating that new and 'innocent' girl would cause him more trouble than ever before. 

-This was written when I was 13, there's some poor grammar and it's not the best story ever-
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Innocent (Louis Tomlinson)

57 parts Complete Mature

They judge her by the way she acts, the way she looks, and the way she dresses. She's all alone, and she's ok with that. No one cares about her, and it's been that way all along. Until Louis Tomlinson comes into her life, and shows her that she actually means something. To him, and everyone else. This is my first real fanfic and I started it when I was 13 so you can judge it if you want. I realize now that I wasn't a very good writer back then. Trust me though, you can see as I get better/older as it goes on. I think the last 30/20 chapters are a big improvement in comparison to the beginning. I started "Innocent" as a 13 year old and finished it as a 17 year old, and you can tell. If there are any cringe mistakes feel free to point them out. Whenever I read this I feel annoyed at myself cause of all the mistakes and I'm too lazy to fix and locate SO MANY of them. I can't decide on a cover so it may look different over time