Until the Deed is Done
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Last published Sun, Jun 3, 2018
A legend of two brothers and two curses. A clan rise in power due to the elders unsavory ways. One high family opposed them. The oldest son cursed to commit heinous crimes on the clans, warrants death from the only other person who could match his strength, the 2nd son of same family. A crime also if sibling kill each other. Now the curse is on 2nd son. While 2nd son search for his older brother, the elders took this chance to annilation the rest of their clan, even the 2nd son's young pregnant wife. This drove the 2nd son, who now is only strongest mage warrior of the clans, into the annilation of the entire clans, all except the 2 who was sent to safty when their clan were targeted and destroyed. However, with the last remaining clans-man breathing his last breath, he put a second curse onto the 2nd son, making it where he could never die until the very last person he kills, is rectify by a sacrifice of himself helping wrongs to those that are chosen. Over 1000 years has past... (pictures used are not mine but the rightful owners)
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