Ill With Similes [draft 2]

I plan to make my book- Ill With Similes in to a real novel. This is my second draft, with everything I was afraid to say in the first.

{Teenage years bring sleepless nights and reckless days. Rachel is lost. No parents, no will, she moves from her Chicago home to a dusty southern ranch to live with her aunt. All that is left of her old life is music. A night of self discovery brings a shady guitarist, a storm, and a new perception of rock and roll.}