For Revision

For Revision

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This collection of poems is comprised of drafts meant for revision. The purpose of this particular volume is to generate constructive discussion on the language, content, and aesthetic choices of my work. Anyone is welcome to comment, so long as each comment is aimed toward constructive criticism.
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I've been through my own struggle, whether it was created in my head by way of prolonged sadness or bitterness/resentment, or if I was struggling with things I had no control over like failed friendships, a broken heart, or family drama. This is my advice to you based off of my life experiences. Along with pieces of life experience advice I've included poetry and spoken word pieces from different perspectives and I try to break down life into beautiful words that people can relate to and see that we all struggle- you're not alone and we are each so valuable.

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