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Ongoing, First published Apr 30, 2013
Have you ever met someone so perfect, you actually tried to find reasons to dislike them? Have you ever loved a person so much, that you started to hate and resent them for it? There's a thin line between love and hate, and I've been standing on it since the day I was born.  

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Blair King's life was ripped away from her by her perfect sister, who wasn't as perfect as everyone thought she was. Most still do, but Blair knows better. She knows not to trust what you see on the surface, for it isn't what it seems. When she is forced to go to a Catholic boarding school in Virginia, she meets the definition of perfection, just like her sister. Will she let things fall into place, or will she push him away because in her world, perfection doesn't exist? 

**Pretty much based on the characters from "A Separate Peace", but created into a Romance**
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