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Make Me Better Mr. Alpha(Canceled)

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Reads 15,206
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Parts 12
Time 54m

(STORY CANCELED. BEING RE-WRITTEN)
Sara is a young wolf who has a broken past. Her mother died protecting her and Sara was punished for it. Years later at the age 17 this young wolf will learn what it means to hate her pack and how to break free. But is she really free? 

On the run for three weeks without knowing where she is Sara runs into the largest pack in Ireland, the Blood Moon pack. Known for being ruthless and over dominating this pack welcomes the abused female with open arms. 

Scared and afraid that this pack will turn out like her other, Sara tries at every corner to run from Alpha Justin. This ruthless man just might be her ticket to becoming fully free of her past, but can she let him heal her? And just when she might let him in something goes wrong, something that could threaten the whole pack.

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A/N : Yes i know i have other stories but hey, my mind works on it's own, i do not control it it controls me! So far i have my mind stuck on this story and until it moves on you are stuck reading this as an update! ^.^ try to be nice to it!All Rights Reserved

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The Hybrid by sarahkayy09

I jumped to my feet and punched him in the side. There was hardly an effect. "You're weak" he spat, walking a step closer towards me. I growled as I had had it with this blood sucking devil! My blue eyes fumed in anger as my wolf was released. I am a white wolf. Liam's eyes bulged as he saw my true form. He then smiled ready to fight. I lunged for the bastard, knocking him to the ground. His other minions rushed towards me all attaching me at once. I attempted to fight against them. They kept coming on me and it was becoming too much for me to handle. My fur had gone from a snowy white, to a bloody reddish color. So much blood. I laid down. Maybe just a minute of rest. I saw Liam walk up to me. He looked down at me and smiled. "What's wrong little wolf? No more energy?" He smirked. Then Liam was suddenly thrown to the damp ground by something, a jet black wolf with glowing red eyes. He was beautiful with his gleaming coat and strong legs. The black wolf left Liam on the ground and fiercely killed all of Liam's minions easily. He wasn't finished with his prowl, he turned back to face Liam but realized that the pureblooded vampire had already run off. Then I hear a deep growl. "Mate", and my heart stops. ------------ Alexandra's pack is mercilessly destroyed by werewolves most hated species: vampires. The species has hated each other since the beginning of time. But what happens when she finds out she is half vampire and half werewolf? A hybrid cross species who is on the run from the vampire Liam who wants to use her as a trophy. She meets her mate, Tyler, who is the leader of a ruthless pack called the Silvermoon pack. But will he be able to protect her from the relentless vampire out to get her? ----- My very first attempt at writing a book so be gentle! Many errors and typos!

Ari's Reverse Harlem by AMGabie

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Wanted by the Wolves [COMPLETED] by hexodus

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