Twyla the Taken
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This is a fantasy novel written for tweens. It's a coming-of-age story. It is about a tween girl that isn't accepted to well in her community. She ends up making some seriously devestating mistakes and she hates herself for it. She looses everything because of her mistake. Her guilt is killing her! She tries to escape from her guilt and pain. She ends up meetting some really interesting persons, from an entirely different world, and they change her life in ways she would have never dreamed of. In the end she learns about forgiveness, acceptance, courage, and love.
#JustWriteIt
This is a first draft of a novel. I'm still in the process of writing it this month. After I write the entire novel, I'll go back and edit it and then publish the revised, final draft. So, when reading this, please keep in mind that I have been writing everytging that comes to mind, nd the final draft will be much, much sleeker. I'd appreciate any critiques. :)
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