The Legend Of A Fallen Raven

Please correct all my mistakes! A girl who lost her past, a gay price who lost his first love owning to the betrayal from his own sister, a homophobic and cruel king and a girl who wants to kill the king. And all of this in a world full of demons, vampires, werewolves and well one ( or maybe a lot?) Fallen Raven.

I'm only own the story, the right for the drawn pictures are owned by the Artist (my wonderful friend Philippa), all other pictures are from the Internet.

Spoiler:

"You can't do this!", i shouted at my uncle. "Watch your language! I can and I will! My nephew isn't gay!", he shouted back. Angry and upset I ran away. I had to safe Jake. Why was my sister a fucking bitch and betrayed her own brother? I had on day to safe the love of my life against my insane uncle and king. And I didn't know what I could do. His twin sister! Maybe she had an idea. I ran out of the palaste to Jake's house. I knocked at the door and waited. After a few seconds a girl, probably his sister, opened the door and looked at my with the same hazelnut green eyes as her brother. Her long brown Hair was curled. Behind her was a skinny, blue haired girl. Her also blue eyes were full of fear. "Where is Jake?", the brown haired girl asked. "Are you Elena? And who's this?", I asked back. " Yes I'm and this is my sister by adoption Phoenyx. And now tell me, where the fuck is Jake?", she screamed at the end. "My sister, that bitch, betrayed us at my uncle. He will kill him! And I don't know how to safe him." "I said him that he is stupid when he starts a relationship with the prince.", she discomposed. The smaller girl hemmed and said: " I have an idea..."