Crushed World (WIP)
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  • Parts 3
  • Time 35m
  • Reads 394
  • Votes 31
  • Parts 3
  • Time 35m
Ongoing, First published Nov 15, 2015
Mature
This story is about a guy who has to find himself when confronted with feelings for someone he didnt think he'd grow attached to. Work in progress. 

First  story. I really would like some feedback on it to know if I should continue or not. It seems like it could be a strong story but I don't know if I should finish it or not. Feedback would be nice !
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