The Light Inside of Us
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Ongoing7m
Last published Mon, Nov 16, 2015
Squeal of "The Darkness Inside of Us"
The bright light shined into my eyes, I closed my eyes to keep my eyes from burning. Once I opened my eyes again all I saw was white walls. I was trying to remember where I was and how did I get here.
My throat went dry, I looked down at myself. My skin seemed to be paler than usual. A cord on my arm up to a machine. It was beeping in a steady beat about 1 beat each second. I sat there listening to the beeps.
Tris has been in a coma for about a year now, but when she finally wakes up. She can't help to wonder if her love Jake has waited for her or moved on. Jake certainly has moved on with Audrey. But When Tris finds out how will this all play out? Will Jake stay with Audrey? Or will he come back to his High School sweetheart?
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