Mary Sues And Their Clichés
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so here i will be putting Mary Sues OC i find on my own or on other blogs (i will credit the blog of course) and if i dont have an OC to rant on, ill just rant on their clichés, ill even give some tips on how to avoid these clichés and make a good OC, if you want, send me info about your OC and ill see if shes a Mary Sue and tell you how to make her a non-Sue, i will be doing from multiple fandoms not just anime, i have high hopes for this book, and its my first book ever, my Co-Writer is @HonestyKills12 she is amazing so go follow her!!! please enjoy!..............please (´Д` )
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