Rogue
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I live in a perfect world. It's a paradise I've been forced to love. A paradise that I've only known. One that is so delicately ordered that if you're to step out of line once, you're gone. I live in a perfect world that's not perfect at all. Order is key, laws must be abided. Fear has been struck in people's hearts. And this perfect world.... It's on the verge of cracking.
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