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The Countdown

The Countdown

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Thu, Jan 14, 2016
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"Kyrie Nooo" Remi said as i pulled the trigger showing no emotion . I feel all of the walls crashing down around me as i seen Her body go limp , Still holding the Gun tight in my hands . To be Honest i felt no remorse not one bit of it . My whole life i thought everything would be different if i turned myself around and got on the right path but looks like im about to go back to my old Heartless ways. 21 Year old Kyrie Rodriguez was what most people would call rude , mean , belligerent black female you would probably even think that she dropped out of high school or her father is a drug lord well no Kyrie is a quite college girl that is majoring in business in Tampa , Florida her mother and father are Big business cartel owners and Kyrie knows nothing about there business until she gets kicked out of college But one thing kyrie does know is this secret that she has been keeping for years and she was coldly threaten by her parents not to tell a soul . 23 year old Hezekiah and his two brothers Remi and Javier are 3 different complete people that you would think to never even be around each other if they weren't siblings Something that you wouldn't expect is that all 3 of them are working with Kyrie's parents . Little do they know is that Kyrie's parents are preparing to get rid of there daughter and the boys because kyrie knows a secret that she was threaten to keep what happens when kyrie decides to black mail her parents with this secret . But wait there is a twist one of the brothers are teaming up with Kyries parents. What happens when Kyrie figures out her parents Motive? What happens when Kyrie decides to tell this little secret ?
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