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Last published Mon, Dec 17, 2018
After the death of Victoria and Noah's parents, nothing has been the same.
It's been nine years since their death and they do not know who murdered their parents. Their memories of them are fading away even though they have albums of all four of them.
On Victoria's seventeenth birthday, she felt something was going wrong, like someone was stalking her. She's not one hundred percent sure, but she has a feeling.
She kept getting these love notes and presents. It is freaking her out a whole lot, until day, when she was driving home alone from a friend's house, and her tires got busted. One thing led to another, she got herself kidnapped.
Now she is trapped and nowhere to run. She is being held against her will. Will her friends find her in time or will she have to give up hope of ever being saved?
Read and find out what happens next.
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