Frozen in His Memory

This is a short story that I began and finished in my english class, centering on satire and dystopian societies.

Richard Lewis, 23, is a family man that cares deeply for his brother, Charlie, 31. Filled to the brim with anxiety and worry, Richard does not know how he can live without his brother. Yet, now he could possibly have a chance to do just that. The question is-is Richard chosen to take the shot at a brand new life, without his brother?