Not Like The Others

Hello I'm only a freshman in high school and I've been think about writing a book similar to my life for a while now. Not all of this is true, some parts are some aren't. In order to help me get better at writing Please leave comments that could be helpful. If you don't like my book then don't read it ~Rose

I'm Joy Andrews, I got to school in a small town in Ohio, and I'm not like most people at my school. I'm a little over weight, but you don't exactly notice, I wear clothes that are a bit more mature, I can't afford most things like all of the really nice clothes and shoes. However I know what true wealth is and most people don't see that in ZHS. I'm the girl that appears to be happy most of the time when really she's breaking on the inside, suffering from depression. With a tight group of friends, and the most important friend to me is my best friend who I've had a huge crush on since that September day two years ago.

Braidon Miller is my best friend, he's somewhat popular, (mostly with the girls), he's also a bit of the bad boy. I know it's a cliche, but I don't care, he has snake bites and shaggy dirty blonde hair with plugs, he seemed pretty scary though, he wore ripped jeans all the time and a t-shirt with a woman beater on underneath. Despite his appearance he's actually a really sweet guy that always wants to make me feel better. And he's extremely intelligent

Okay everyone I know this isn't very good and it's pretty detailed, but It's hard for me not to go into so much detail. Sorry! ~Rose