First six chapters are good and edited. I was eleven when I wrote this story and...it's terrible. I think I can save it...I hope I can. There will be some serious, serious heavy editing happening here soon!
"What is it with you a fire?" My half brother Draco asks me. "You know, other than you being the child of the phoenix."
I raise my head from the pillow to blink at him innocently. "Water drowns but you can swim from it. A curse could kill you, but you can shield yourself from it. Nothing destroys as fast, burns as brightly or lights up the dark like fire."
The words Natasha Saphire tells her brother are the words she lives by. However, over her time at Hogwarts, getting to know Seamus Finnigan as she did, plus all of her friends, she will find out the truth behind the Phoenix Flamel Incantartem she was cursed with. Dark forces will weigh Tasha down; will she find her sunshine in the dark?