I Went To A Party, Mum
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Complete Mon, May 6, 2013<5 mins
A young girl is leaving a party after following her mums advice and not drinking. On her way home she encounters a drunk driver who crashes into her. This poem explores her last thoughts and feelings towards drunk drivers.
This is not my poem, I found it on the internet and I thoroughly enjoyed it so I wanted to share it with you.
WARNING: You may cry!
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