A Little Too Much

A Little Too Much

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He's a fun loving, motivated, and good looking eighteen year old with a kind heart and big dreams of success. She's a shy, strong, and sentimental seventeen year old with kind eyes and a mind set on integrity and education. The pair were opposites. He was out going, she was shy. But they had a surprising friendship, a friendship they vowed to keep stable and strong until death did them part, He brought out the best in her, she brought out the best in him. The twinkle in their eyes when they were together was enough proof. Their feelings for each other was never a variable in their friendship. Until she developed them for him. She kept them welled up inside of her, on the brink of sudden combustion, but she tried with all her might to push them back out of her mind. But it didn't work. She had major feelings for him, and he was completely oblivious. She tried hard to act normal and playful around him as she usually did. Until she burst. She belted out her feelings, not caring about how he felt about her. But, he felt the same way. The pair became a couple. Until a new boy came to the school, and entered the equation. They became best friends, and he became distant from her. They drifted away, and had a very emotional break up, and he flew away from Kansas with the boy after graduation to pursue their dreams of becoming Viners. All he left her was his favorite Maroon Neff beanie on her bed, a single red rose, and a goodbye letter. She was sad, and the pain of missing him was a little too much. She tried to get him off her mind by applying to college. She applied to various colleges, but only got into one. UCLA. She was happy, unaware that he and the boy had flew off to LA. She was getting along fine, and the pain was easing up. Until one day, the pair clashed at a Christmas party. ------ Some plot line development and title goes to the song title and lyrics of "A Little Too Much" by Shawn Mendes. New title and description, Was once named "runaway".
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My Teddy

The corner of his mouth tilts upward slightly. I smile again. A smile!? A tiny one, but still. "Hm. So I got you to smile, that's progress, yeah? Can I get your name now?" I ask, swinging my feel a little. He shakes his head shyly, his mouth not moving at all. Geez! Why do I want to hear this dude talk so much? "Okay, that's fine. I can give you a nickname." I offer happily. He looks up from his book, raising his eyebrows. I just stare for a moment. He has nice eyes. Pretty brown chocolate orbs. They remind me so much of....... "Teddy." He shakes his head immediately, frowning. "What, why not? You remind me of my old teddy bear. He was a good listener and he didn't talk much..... just like you." I say softly, tilting my head. He continues to shake his head. I fold my arms, leaning back in my seat. "Yeah, it's definitely sticking. Teddy.....It has a nice ring to it, yeah?" He sighs, the first sound I have ever heard him make. "No." . . . *Jordan* Teddy!? Seriously!? She gave me a fucking NICKNAME!? What the hell does this girl want!? I stuff my hands into my pockets, walking down the busy street. Forget about her. She's just a annoying pretty girl, she'll go away. Everybody does. She HAS to go away. *Spoiler alert*: she doesn't. Don't get close to people or they'll end up getting hurt. That's my mindset. I've been through enough of that. This girl doesn't belong in my world anyway. She's too innocent. *Mature content* {Just a quick update, I am basically rewriting the story. I wrote it when I was in 8th grade and it makes me cringe every time I try to go back and edit it so keep in mind that it'll get better}

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