Writing Away The Clouds

Writing Away The Clouds

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S Y N O P S I S This is the story of a few troubled teenagers, Kabi one from an abused childhood and broken home. Together they learn how to piece each other back up again, and learn that their flaws make them who they are. Through mistakes, they start to correct them. Through the tears, they see clearer. And through the soul they can read the world. E X C E R P T "We shouldn't fall in love; we should just love, because everything that falls gets broken." The pink banner hanging on the plain gray wall said. I'd felt as if it was a lyric of Taylor Swift's but couldn't confirm it in my mind. I hadn't listened to enough of her songs to know whether it was true or not. The building was quite tiny, but it was nice. Reminded me of home, and smelled like apples and cinnamon. The rooms were lit up well, a great contrast to what was outside; just bleak skies and gray clouds. Smiling a little, I felt a bit welcomed, taking a plastic cup full of coffee from the wooden table to the right. ************** The scents swarming in the atmosphere of this early evening were intricate; brief scents of lavender shaded roses with seven dark outer petals and eight light small inner petals, plus the clean smell of three dewdrops just sitting lazily on the fringes of natural plant silk. At other moments, it was the brief wisps of pine trees and the sun beating down on their rich bark. The brisk chill of winds descending rapidly from the North, parted her hair as it hit her face, occasionally making her eyes water. Birds flew overhead, simply looking black against the dimming sun. Though the world was perfect in this moment, she was not.
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I was just thinking. I swear. But maybe my mind over thought. It's weird that everything can seem so simple, straight forward. Black and white. Two colors. So obvious. So there. Him and Her. Two people. So obvious. So there. But once you add gray, things get kind of complicated. Then you add color. And it's a wonderfully complicated bright world. She's two in one. The storm and the shade. No one ever stops to thank the storm for shading them from what's above it. What if the sun was too strong, too powerful that day and the storm came along just to protect us all from it? It was this epic battle between the two and the storm was hurting and it cased all this damage to the earth. No one thanks the storm for its sacrifice when it finally loses the battle and the sun shows its smug face. We all hate the storm for the disaster it created and praise the sun, when the storm just wanted to protect us. The storm and the shade. She's the storm and the shade. She's the chaos and the calm. Only I can't see the chaos. Not fully. She's keeping it all inside. All I see is the calm. I can tell though. I can tell there's chaos. I just can't see it. It's not so black and white. It's not a simple boy likes girl. Girl likes boy. It never was. But I like her. I do. The storm and the shade.

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