A Heart without a Beat

A Heart without a Beat

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Natalie Mayan used to be a normal 15 year old girl with blonde hair and blue eyes, In love with the high school jock Braiden McCoy, dating him for 11 months everything turns out perfect for them. He proposed to her, excitedly she exclaims YES! 2 weeks into the engagement Natalie was shopping in Bayer with her best friend Lindy when she receives a call from Braiden's sister Courtney, hesitantly Courtney says holding back tears "Braiden's been in a accident on the football field, they said there's nothing they can do but wait, hes in a coma Natalie. Natalie bursted into tears, dropping her phone and the product she was holding and fell to the floor. Her best friend Brianna immediately comes to her need screaming "What's wrong?!", Natalie pointed towards her phone, Brianna picks up the phone and answers "Hello?", "Hello" was the reply back "What"s wrong with Braiden?" "He's in a coma and we have to wait." "We"ll be right there" Brianna hangs up the phone, picks Natalie's stuff up and the product she's going to buy. And helps Natalie up. "We're going to pay for this, then going to the hospital." They purchase the products and head to the hospital. They are immediately sent to the room where Braiden's unconscious body laid.Natalie walks into the room by Braiden and touches his face singing part of "Here comes goodbye" By Rascal Flats. Touching his face she whispers "Baby, I love you" all of a sudden the machine Braiden is hooked up to goes haywire, beeping neurotically. Doctors rush in and the machine stops.Then sadly the doctor says i'm sorry, he's gone. Then with a recorder he turns to speak. "Braiden McCoy pronounced dead, DOB:9-28-96 Age:17 COD:Brain damage with the nerve.Time:7:49
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Everything was going as planned in Brie's life till Covid-19 came. She was all set to go home, even got on a plane. But what happens when their stop over was the last destination they would go. She had no choice but to stay with the only person she knew in town. Charlie. Her brothers best friend, who she thought she hated but really, deep down always loved. Charlie had seen Brie since she was a toddler, always protected her and treated her like family. But then he grew up and realised that he was in love with this girl but could never act on the feelings. What will happen when both of them are quarantined together with no escape what so ever? --------------------------------------- "I just didn't think Brian would be happy with it, but now looking back I should have asked you.. Natalie Smith wasn't the best date." He chuckled. "Well you should have, I would have been the best date." I said when a pout, this was definitely the alcohol talking. "Ah don't pout bug. Like I said if I had the courage I would have, but like always I never really do. Even now." He said walking towards me. "What does that mean?" He came close and cupped my face in his hand. "I've been in love with you since fifth grade Brie. I know it's stupid, but it's true. Now I've just ruined our friendship and tomorrow I'll just blame it on the alcohol. I'm just rude to you because I don't know how else to react... I sorry". ---------------------------------------- this story is something really spontaneous, not planned. but pls enjoy😌😌

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