A Heart without a Beat

A Heart without a Beat

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Natalie Mayan used to be a normal 15 year old girl with blonde hair and blue eyes, In love with the high school jock Braiden McCoy, dating him for 11 months everything turns out perfect for them. He proposed to her, excitedly she exclaims YES! 2 weeks into the engagement Natalie was shopping in Bayer with her best friend Lindy when she receives a call from Braiden's sister Courtney, hesitantly Courtney says holding back tears "Braiden's been in a accident on the football field, they said there's nothing they can do but wait, hes in a coma Natalie. Natalie bursted into tears, dropping her phone and the product she was holding and fell to the floor. Her best friend Brianna immediately comes to her need screaming "What's wrong?!", Natalie pointed towards her phone, Brianna picks up the phone and answers "Hello?", "Hello" was the reply back "What"s wrong with Braiden?" "He's in a coma and we have to wait." "We"ll be right there" Brianna hangs up the phone, picks Natalie's stuff up and the product she's going to buy. And helps Natalie up. "We're going to pay for this, then going to the hospital." They purchase the products and head to the hospital. They are immediately sent to the room where Braiden's unconscious body laid.Natalie walks into the room by Braiden and touches his face singing part of "Here comes goodbye" By Rascal Flats. Touching his face she whispers "Baby, I love you" all of a sudden the machine Braiden is hooked up to goes haywire, beeping neurotically. Doctors rush in and the machine stops.Then sadly the doctor says i'm sorry, he's gone. Then with a recorder he turns to speak. "Braiden McCoy pronounced dead, DOB:9-28-96 Age:17 COD:Brain damage with the nerve.Time:7:49
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"I... Am here to see you.", I told him as I placed my hands around his neck. I could feel my heart beat getting faster but I had to keep it strong if I had to survive this scenario. "What?", Brandon asked completely startled. I leaned in more closer to him. The only good thing in this entire scene was that he wasn't pushing me back due to my creepy behaviour. "Oh... Bran, I was missing you so much, I just... I needed to see you.", I said as I came up with lie. "Are you drunk?", Brandon asked as he leaned in closer trying to smell my mouth. Thank God Fel had given me her mint gum only moments before I went commando and came inside the locker room. "What?", I scoffed still standing extremely close to Brandon. "I just.... I was missing your gorgeous face.", I told another lie. But wait? His face is gorgeous so that isn't a lie. And was I not missing seeing him? I noticed Brandon who just had his eyes popped out of his socket with bewilderment at my words. I decided to peck him on the cheek before I storm out of the locker room. I leaned ahead to peck Brandon who moved his face in my direction and instead of his cheeks, our lips crashed. Brushing against each other, our lips touched. I could feel fireworks exploding inside my entire body. With my neurological system not responding anymore. ******* Depicting the hostility and vulnerability of a young woman to a society the story centers around a normal sophomore, Amy Cole, who had a normal life. Well way too normal for her situation. Amy's life was all good until one day, when her friends dumped her and blamed her for something she never even did. Her life takes a complete turn as her childhood crush, Brandon Mayhew, the Mayor's son, who once broke her heart, rushes back into her life through a series of events. With new friends, shifting thoughts, confused feelings and fighting anxiety and standing for the right thing. Amy makes her way to the top. Only to get at the top of everyone's hate list.

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