Choose (Interactive Mentalist Story)
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"Make the decision, you either choose to stay with me; your loyal friend, or you go with ... him - the betrayer."
"But I don't want to...-"
"CHOOSE!"
This is a story where YOU make the decisions! You and only you decide how the story is going to end. But be aware, not all choices lead to a good ending... So choose wisely...
Sean, the boyfriend you hate so much, gets murdered by Red John. You were sent to the CBI for an interrogation with the one and only Patrick Jane. He soon figures out that something or someone in your past could lead the team to the arrest of the serial killer they've been trying to catch for years.
Dedicated to my cat.
Because I like to dedicate things to my cat, Cees.
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