Finding Perfection
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Last published Sun, Jan 29, 2017
Everyone has a different idea of perfection. Peyton's idea mainly consists of :
- Losing weight
- Gaining popularity
- Acing tests
- Getting LOTS of attention
You can call her the Queen Bee. She has minions, Is known by the whole school, and people copy what she wears. Call her a slut, and she will make sure her high heels dig deep into your skin. She thought she was close to what everyone defined 'Perfect' as.
But there's a new girl in school. She wears ratty clothes, barely speaks and keeps her head down most of the time. Yet she manages to get the hottest guy in school to fall for her,( who Peyton was crushing on) and suddenly, she's the center of all gossip.
Peyton, the current 'Queen Bee', can't help but wonder what this new girl had over her. Was being herself not enough? Was this new girl closer to obtaining what everyone wants? How could she let herself be so insecure? There were a lot of questions that had to be answered.
Watch as Peyton Vega stumbles, and falls, but eventually picks herself up and places herself on the road to finding perfection.
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