This is something I am writing for English class. It is supposed to have a Gothic theme. I am writing a short version for class, later I plan on rewriting it to make it longer. Right now I just need some opinions on what I have written so far. This story is about twin sisters Minah and Miya. Who find the forbidden Manor while playing tag in the woods. Minah is the main character and the younger of the two. The story will be about her experience in the Forbidden Manor while she looks for Miya. Along the way she will unlock its secrets and eventually learn what happened to the family that lived there. The girls are about 17. Minah has long black hair and green eyes; Miya has shoulder length dark brown hair and green eyes.All Rights Reserved
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